site check / help

[robbie]

Really need some feedback on this. Been staring at it too long.

*edit* sent to client.

thanks

[Jeewhizz]

I really like it, but think it's missing a 'punch' - maybe some photos or something?

Jee

[robbie]

I really like it, but think it's missing a 'punch' - maybe some photos or something?

Totally agree. The initial mock up had a lovely image on it but she didn't like it and asked for no pics.
I've added a little detail at the bottom, but I still think it's missing something.

Thanks Jee

[Jeewhizz]

Needs some footer text i think - to 'finalise' the bottom

[samhs]

I like the idea, but I think you've tried to go monocromatic, and ended up with too high a contrast. Have you tried losing the high-contrast black and going for shades of the cream/skin tone instead. Lose the tints, use shades, and I think it will hang together nicely. Does that make sense?

Sam

[robbie]

Thanks Sam. yes, makes sense.

[Chris H]

The quoted text needs to be 'above the fold' as well.

[robbie]

The quoted text needs to be 'above the fold' as well.

Ta. made some changes now, and will send to client.
Thanks for suggestions.