Is this Too Simple?

[charlie]

design for a dental practise ... mentioned a couple of sites they liked of mine which were clean and simple and also have a clean simple brochure (see below).

I need to add a footer and a couple of small amends but what do you think of the site below ... (note . waiting for better qual logo) ?

http://www.chant4.com/testsites/entwisles2010/

Brochure screeny

[Ben]

Remove the background separators from the navbar, they aren't lining up well at all - the same effect could be achieved by giving a 'border-right' to each of the menu items, with the except of the last one.

Get some padding and white space into the design as well - give the photo room to breath, and have a look into a grid - so everything flows nicely. For example, the left-hand side - the logo, nav and main copy all sit at different spacings from the left border, make this uniform for all elements.

hth

[charlie]

cheers for that .... will sort that now :-)

ta

[Jeep Stone]

The only thing I would say is that on first impressions it looks like you've spelt dentist wrong, due to his name. Maybe worth trying to emphasise it slightly differently?

[Haze]

I sort of agree with Jeep... Perhaps make the surname the same blue as used on the left biography...?